Well I fixed the drawing, but if you still have more crits then you can say them. Thanks a lot for the help. -------- Bien arreglé el dibujo pero si todavía tienen más críticas pueden decirme. Muchas gracias por la ayuda.
I'm fan of most of the Nintendo franchises after all.
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No one can get better without critique, appreciate how others take the time spotting the mistakes of your drawings instead of getting mad at them for ruining your "perfect world"....
It's harder than just writing "nice" or adding a smilie I tell ya.
The thing that strikes me about this that could be more realistic is Samus, I think the anatomy is a little off. The suit seems top-heavy and the hip area looks strange.
To be honest, I haven't looked at much official art for the game, but from what I have seen you captured the mood just right. The coloring is also gorgeous! The colors on Ridley are especially nice, and very smooth.
Oh, looking again, I see one more thing: the circle of light/shadow around the picture seems a bit too... regular, if you know what I mean. Maybe you could make the shadows more gradual around the corners of the picture. On the other hand, maybe that's just my personal preference in "framing" of pictures. As I mentioned above, I don't actually know how they use shadows around the official art for the game. You might have that part perfect and I wouldn't know!
Well, that's my attempt at critical commentary. Hope it helps a little.
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No one can get better without critique, appreciate how others take the time spotting the mistakes of your drawings instead of getting mad at them for ruining your "perfect world"....
It's harder than just writing "nice" or adding a smilie I tell ya.
How the heck did I miss this!?
Once again you have stunned me with your outstanding artwork Flama, I really am lost for words.
My only criticism is that Samus' shoulder pads seem a bit too big. but its probably just the angle.
Otherwise, fantastic.
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GO WILDCATS! WE'RE NUMBER ONE!
Oh apparantly H-Balth can't express her love for me or else someone goes into her account and changes everything. Faggots.
This is amazingly well done, I especially like the background, I like how you implemented textures into it, although the one thing I find off is Samus, she does seem mis proportioned, her left leg looks detached.
As to make it look real, well perhaps you could make the rocks a bit more worn, they seem to smooth to me, for example look at the bricks in this picture [link]
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No one can get better without critique, appreciate how others take the time spotting the mistakes of your drawings instead of getting mad at them for ruining your "perfect world"....
It's harder than just writing "nice" or adding a smilie I tell ya.
by far your est in a long time
fave'd!
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Practice makes improvement!
Perfection is UNACHIEVEABLE!!
To be honest, I haven't looked at much official art for the game, but from what I have seen you captured the mood just right. The coloring is also gorgeous! The colors on Ridley are especially nice, and very smooth.
Oh, looking again, I see one more thing: the circle of light/shadow around the picture seems a bit too... regular, if you know what I mean. Maybe you could make the shadows more gradual around the corners of the picture. On the other hand, maybe that's just my personal preference in "framing" of pictures. As I mentioned above, I don't actually know how they use shadows around the official art for the game. You might have that part perfect and I wouldn't know!
Well, that's my attempt at critical commentary. Hope it helps a little.
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No one can get better without critique, appreciate how others take the time spotting the mistakes of your drawings instead of getting mad at them for ruining your "perfect world"....
It's harder than just writing "nice" or adding a smilie I tell ya.
How the heck did I miss this!?
Once again you have stunned me with your outstanding artwork Flama, I really am lost for words.
My only criticism is that Samus' shoulder pads seem a bit too big. but its probably just the angle.
Otherwise, fantastic.
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GO WILDCATS! WE'RE NUMBER ONE!
Oh apparantly H-Balth can't express her love for me or else someone goes into her account and changes everything. Faggots.
As to make it look real, well perhaps you could make the rocks a bit more worn, they seem to smooth to me, for example look at the bricks in this picture [link]
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"Give it a good screw... LIKE A MAN!" - Leeron of ~gurren-lagann
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